Storm Helmet

Storm Helmet
Storm Helmet
what do you think of this poem?

wear a helmet

I was sitting on my front step
there was a little boy on his tricycle inching across the sidewalk
with cautious steady movement
his grandfather followed from behind,
a fat middle aged woman pulled up in a white car
with a long cigarette smoldering in her mouth
she yelled “wear a helmet!”
with a voice that has made men into drunkards
the grand father lifted up the helmet and brandished it at the fat woman
and she drove off in a storm
the old man stopped and watched the little boy
move slowly across the pavement
then put the helmet on his own head
and spat into the grass.

This poem is very specific and has great details, one suggestion is to make it have a tune put a rhyme if you want, but the poem is great, but just watch the tune, but the first two lines are great and so is the rest of the poem, i hope you don’t think I am lying.

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